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I like the way you a real fact about stars when you said "brighter the star the faster it burns out." Change "get tired physically and mentally, and I seem to disappear." because it seems like you are saying the stars get tired so switch it around to say "Like stars I seem to disappear, because I get tired physically and mentally." Think about changing the word everlasting to something else because it is contradictory to what you said earlier about how stars burn out.
I like the way you a real fact about stars when you said "brighter the star the faster it burns out." Change "get tired physically and mentally, and I seem to disappear." because it seems like you are saying the stars get tired so switch it around to say "Like stars I seem to disappear, because I get tired physically and mentally." Think about changing the word everlasting to something else because it is contradictory to what you said earlier about how stars burn out.
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