1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
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I really admire how creative you are in this paper. I love how the paper resembles your life and the mistakes you've made and how the eraser shows you're trying to fix them. How did you think to compare your life to paper . In my opinion this essay is perfect because it is unique to you .
Your essay was very deep and moving for me and it transitioned well. In the fourth paragraph, fourth sentence you could probably take out the comma after "but,I do not like to talk to people." Overall it was a very good paper with a lot of very good points that many can learn from.
ReplyDeleteI really admire how creative you are in this paper. I love how the paper resembles your life and the mistakes you've made and how the eraser shows you're trying to fix them. How did you think to compare your life to paper . In my opinion this essay is perfect because it is unique to you .
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