Monday, January 30, 2017

Malia Brown

Lovely Glasses-Dafen Oushi
Reflection 

2 comments:

  1. I enjoyed your essay very much! If you never had problems with your eyes, why did you need glasses? To polish I would just go through and make sure all my "I" are capital. I saw one in the fourth paragraph.

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  2. I like your essay very much! If you never had problems with your eyes, why did you need glasses? To polish I would just go through and make you space between the word and make sure all your "I" are capital.

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