Monday, January 30, 2017

Mallory Mitchell


The Intoxication of Tango by R Young Art

2 comments:

  1. You do a great job telling about the different parts of your object and how they relate to you. I wasn't really sure what you meant when you said "barn doors" for the camera. Maybe you could briefly describe what they look like.

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  2. I enjoyed the part of the story where you talked about your qualities, and how you wanted those qualities to be seen by others. Have you made a difference with anyone's life yet? Maybe you could go further into detail about who's life you've changed and where they are at now.

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