1) Click New Post (upper right hand corner). 2) Type YOUR NAME in the Post field. 3) Upload (or copy and paste) a painting that reflects your essay. Include the title (italics) and the artist's name in the caption. 4) Type your essay's title in the field with your painting. Click the link button (looks like a chain). It will ask for a web address. Go to your Google doc; click Share, and get the shareable link. Return to blog post. Paste link in the field.
I feel like that in this Symbol essay you put your heart to it. I can tell that this is really something that you want to do with your life. In paragraph 2, 2nd sentence, would it flow better if that sentence was divided? I think that this essay was really good, and I dont think that anything needs to be changed. :)
I like the meaning behind your essay. I like when you talk about the bright colors,and how is makes the hospital happier. The only thing I see that I don't like . You repeat yourself many times.
I feel like that in this Symbol essay you put your heart to it. I can tell that this is really something that you want to do with your life. In paragraph 2, 2nd sentence, would it flow better if that sentence was divided? I think that this essay was really good, and I dont think that anything needs to be changed. :)
ReplyDeleteI like the meaning behind your essay. I like when you talk about the bright colors,and how is makes the hospital happier.
ReplyDeleteThe only thing I see that I don't like . You repeat yourself many times.