Friday, February 3, 2017

Keldrin Staples

My Baby Picture 
Image result for baby picture of father and son painting

3 comments:

  1. Good job with stating facts on how you and your dad are alike, and how you're going to be like him when you grow. You could fix the last sentence in the last paragraph.

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  2. I enjoyed the details of how you and your dad are similar, and how you used to go to work with him. There are a few punctuation errors that could be easily fixed, but other than that you did a great job!

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