Friday, February 3, 2017

Toni Walker












Empanadas- Carmen Lomas Garza

2 comments:

  1. This was a great essay, no major errors.
    Could have explained how it symbolized you more.
    Better transitioning from paragraph to paragraph.

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  2. This was a very good essay. you don't have any errors well I didn't see any.but You could've been more specific about the games little things like that.But the story was very good.

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